Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-31739971-20180330143109/@comment-29604386-20180520193002

This would be my version of one of the paragraphs. I think that a relationship between the narrator and the fire girl thing would certainly make things interesting.

"To be reunited with the greater Fire Spirit grants me unfathomable power. I thought this moment would never come, that the wait was too long." A childish giggle escaped her scorched lips. Her face, consumed by fire, was smouldering at the lips, the eyes, the ears. Her smile, her beautiful smile, was replaced by a black abyss. "But I've been so naïve! Such power would be worth waiting an eternity! I will usher in a new era of fire and this world will be the first to fall under my crimson dominion. Humanity was born from fire, and to fire it shall return!"

With a single beat of her molten wings she ascended far above us, showering us with lava. I had always considered her to be an angel, hopefully mine. I would have cried, but my tears simply boiled with my eyes. I was right in a way. She was my angel of death.

Of course, the other guy magically saves the narrator so all is good.